Honestly, the only critique I really have is of the title because I think it slightly holds the work back as a whole. If it were me, I would simply change it to something like "The Girl Who Spoke The Universe" or something along those lines. The beauty of your image (aside from basic composition and masterful color correction) lies in that Milky Way up there, which in my opinion seems to be coming from her mouth as opposed to her chatting with it, which is what your title suggests to me. I wouldn't have even bothered to say anything about this except that this is a piece I very much wish I had created myself and, therefore, I really want it to be all it can be. Congrats!
Thank you! And I really cannot answer to that!... I just can say I arrived to this after a LOT of hours on PS moving layers, and deleting things, and transforming things, and infinite layers and stocks, and a outstanding number of failed try-outs.
(late late respond, I'm so sorry!) Thank you very much.And that was the sort of idea behind this. I really liked the idea of a person talking the universe into existing instead of laying aback waiting for the universe to take over his/her life.
I can really relate to the mysticism in this picture. I am psychic, clairvoyant or a seer, not sure of the correct translation. I dream of the future and it comes true. So I have this special kind of relationship to the universe.
That is extremelly cool! I'm really fascinated by all those people that seem to have an extra-developed sensitivity towards the things that surrounds us
Thank you that you find it cool. But it is very troublesome as well. I get depressions easily since I "take over" other people emotions and make them mine, without realising sometimes. I am very sensitive to sad stuff in the world. So it is a lot of pain. I am trying to find my "button" to turn it off and on at will. I really need to get some calm and just be sometimes.
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