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Out Cold

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Where do I go now?
The doors are closed, the windows locked,
the night is falling and I got no direction.
But there's a certain kind of freedom to this solitude
The raindrops on my skin awake my pores
The wind in my face defog my brain
The coldness in the air burned my skin alive...


Theme 98/100 - Out Cold
Self-portrait
Image size
3280x2228px 5.13 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 60D
Shutter Speed
1/16 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Apr 28, 2013, 5:39:09 PM
Sensor Size
21mm
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Nilanja's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

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My first impact is a very positive one! The colours you chose are great and I love the sharpness of the drops and the blurred part at the right! So I have to give you five stars regarding to the technique!

The only thing that disrupts a bit is the white beam at the left...it gives the feeling of a window but still I would have considered not to include..in my opinion it doesn't fit to the rest of the pic, but that's just my taste <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>

I also like the poem you wrote under the pic, which adds a lot to the overall feeling the photo gives!

Regarding to the group, the concept is maybe not a 100% visible so maybe you create a stronger one the next time. All in all I have to say it is a great picture which deserves a lot of views!

Keep it up! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/>